
Here are some of the characters so far in my story Cityside. I Did the best I could :] I also put their names beside it :D Also Its Hard To Do Guys So Im Not Doing The Men ;] Imagine Their Dad Like This: He has short ash brown hair and dark brown eyes. His Name Is John 'Dad' Jayne =]



Monday, February 16, 2009
The characters Of my story ''Stardollized''
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Labels: Aisling, characters, Cityside, Story 3
Cityside Part 2...

I adored my garden. I spent all the free time I had out there. It was a huge field with lots of animals in it. My dad was a farmer. He loved his job.Well told me he did. I dinnt quite believe him. I did most of his work for him. I strolled around the garden picking lovely,yellow daffodils as I walked. My mom would like these. She loved flowers. Just as I was about to go inside my little dog, Prim, Ran over to me.
I put the flowers on the ground as I picked her up in my arms. I patted her sandy coat of fur. I got Prim when we moved here,about 10 years ago. I was 4 so she meant alot to me then as she does now. Prim jumped out of my arms and ran out into the field. I was going to follow her but my mom called me inside ''Come inside,Sweetheart. Your dad has work for you.'' she called as she went back inside.
I picked up the flowers and skipped inside. My dad was shaking his head at Ashleigh's work results as she frowned. I gave to flowers to my mom and she praised them,just as I suspected.When I sat down my mom took a seat next to my dad at the table. ''Olivia...Ashleigh...We Have Some News'' My dad stuttered. I put my feet on my chair and hugged them. I knew what was coming. ''What?''I murmered. ''Well...Here In Barklate...We feel kind of....Lonely, you know? We are surrounded by trees and they're not such good friends to you two.'' I looked at my sister she was looking out the window. She knew what they were going to say too. My mom sighed. ''We have two great news. One...'She smiled and looked down on my dad. ''We're going to have another child.'' Great, I thought to myself. I thought my parents knew better than to bring another child into this world while my dad was losing money buy the second. Guess they were still 'Lovebirds''. ''And'' she started again 'We're moving.To America. New York City'' Once She said city...My heart stopped beating.
To be continued.........
Saturday, February 14, 2009
Cityside.Part 1.

I looked in the mirror. I looked like I did everyday. Dirty jeans. A red flannel shirt. Black boots. I put my deep red hair into a ponytail and put my fringe to the side. I walked down the stairs and into the kitchen.
My dad was sitting at the table on his laptop and my mom was cooking up pancakes. I looked just like my mom. But instead of a beautiful shade of green,my eyes were muddy brown. She smiled at me and I smiled back. I sat down at the table next to my 11 year old sister,Ashleigh. 'You ready for school,Olivia?' my dad asked me. I shrugged.'Not like I have much of a choice' I murmured as I ate my pancake. I was home schooled. Since I lived out in the middle of nowhere in England I didn't exactly have much of a choice. I never had any friends. Me and my sister were close enough.
My dad passed us both a sheet of math questions and we set to work. I was done first,of course. My sister was only on the third question. After a while my dad looked at me. 'Very Good,Liv. All Right.' He smiled his crinkly eyed smile. 'Meh' I shrugged. It wasn't exactly a newsflash. I always got top marks. While I waited for Ashleigh I decided to go outside for a bit. I asked my dad for permission and he agreed. I got up and opened the back door.
To be continued....